Issue 483: Dialog: Tutorial Tom - Typo and Grammar - FreedroidRPG issues

Title	Dialog: Tutorial Tom - Typo and Grammar
Priority	minor	Status	resolved
Assigned To		Keywords	dialog
Linked issues	Dialog: Tutorial Tom -- Typos and Grammar (multiple) View: 484	Watchers

Submitted on 2011-09-26 22h35 by Robr3rd, last changed by matthiaskrgr.

Files
File name	Uploaded	Type	Edit	Remove
TutorialTom.dialog	Robr3rd, 2011-09-26.22:35:15	application/octet-stream

Messages
Author: Robr3rd	Date: 2011-09-26 22h35
In line 788 of /dialogs/TutorialTom.dialog: "You can upgrade most weapons and clothings. First you'll need some materials to craft add-ons." should be: "You can upgrade most weapons and clothing. First, you'll need some materials to craft add-ons." (Replaced "clothings" with "clothing" -- Added a comma after "First" (Since when "first" starts off a sentence, it requires a comma.) This is corrected in the attachment. Attached TutorialTom.dialog.
Author: salimiles	Date: 2011-09-27 02h59
Closing, as this is addressed in issue484 & rb1510 .
Author: ahuillet	Date: 2011-09-27 06h08
Review Request 1510
Author: matthiaskrgr	Date: 2011-09-29 18h07
I think this is fixed with r5044 as well (?)

History
Date	User	Action	Args
2011-09-29 18:07:42	matthiaskrgr	set	status: rejected -> resolved messages: + msg1700
2011-09-27 06:08:50	ahuillet	set	status: resolved -> rejected
2011-09-27 06:08:16	ahuillet	set	messages: + msg1689
2011-09-27 02:59:20	salimiles	set	status: open -> resolved messages: + msg1688 linked: + Dialog: Tutorial Tom -- Typos and Grammar (multiple)
2011-09-26 22:35:15	Robr3rd	create