Original:
"...kill an enemy without having to come in swinging range."
This should be changed to:
"...kill an enemy without having to come within swinging range."
(in -> within) - Line 453
Original:
"...programming in an energy efficient manner so programs cause less heat."
This should be changed to:
"...programming in an energy-efficient manner so programs cause less heat."
(energy efficient -> energy-efficient) - Line 612
Original:
"Here is some more ammunition for it"
This should be changed to:
"Here is some more ammunition for it."
(added punctuation at the end) - Line 492
Original:
"After this, you have to make a socket in your equipment so you can plug the
add-on."
This should be changed to:
"After this, you have to make a socket in your equipment so you can plug in the
add-on."
(plug -> plug in) - Line 791
Original:
"They are general [b]Melee[/b] and [b]Ranged[/b] fighting skills..."
This should be changed to:
"There are general [b]Melee[/b] and [b]Ranged[/b] fighting skills..."
(They -> There) - Line 611
Original:
"Well, Linarian, most of the time, it is."
This should be changed to:
"Well, Linarian, most of the time it is."
(removed unnecessary comma) - Line 444
Original:
"A good technician is able to make use of that parts."
This should be changed to:
"A good technician is able to make use of those parts."
(that -> those) - Line 615
Original:
"Pay attention to the type of the socket the add-on needs."
This should be changed to:
"Pay attention to the type of socket the add-on needs."
(Removed "the" as it's inappropriate) - Line 794
Original:
"...make a socket and plug-in the add-on. Here, take some."
This should be changed to:
"...make a socket and plug in the add-on. Here, take some."
(plug-in -> plug in -- describing an action, not a noun) - Line 801
I figured it would be pretty ridiculous to report each of these individually,
so I simply bundled them all together since it's all for one file anyway. If
this is a problem, just let me know.
All of the above is corrected in the attached file. /dialogs/TutorialTom.dialog
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