Issue486

Title Dialog: Duncan the Bombmaker -- Poor sentence
Priority minor Status resolved
Assigned To Keywords dialog
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Submitted on 2011-09-27 01h26 by Robr3rd, last changed by matthiaskrgr.

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Duncan.dialog Robr3rd, 2011-09-27.01:26:38 application/octet-stream
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Author: Robr3rd Date: 2011-09-27   01h26
/dialogs/Duncan.dialog -- Line 100

Original:
npc_says_random(_"Certainly.", _"Sure.", _"With pleasure I am showing you my 
offers.")

Revised:
npc_says_random(_"Certainly.", _"Sure.", _"With pleasure.")

What was changed:
("With pleasure I am showing you my offers." -> "With pleasure.") -- The 
original is just plain awkward.

This is corrected in the attached file.

Attached Duncan.dialog.
Author: salimiles Date: 2011-09-27   02h47
I put this on the review board as http://rb.freedroid.org/r/1509/ . If you have
a small issue like this, with a patch, just post the patch to the review board.

The wiki page on writing dialogs
(http://www.freedroid.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php?n=Doc.WritingDialogs ) explains how
to submit patches to the review board.

Basically create a patch file by doing 
$ svn diff >~/Desktop/patch.diff

And then upload your patch to the review board.
Author: matthiaskrgr Date: 2011-09-29   17h56
Fixed in r5043. Thanks!
History
Date User Action Args
2011-09-29 17:56:23matthiaskrgrsetstatus: open -> resolved
messages: + msg1697
2011-09-27 02:47:42salimilessetmessages: + msg1686
2011-09-27 01:26:38Robr3rdcreate